Tuesday, October 11, 2011

Beyond The Window

I see my face reflecting in the window, as the rain falls;
How many times I've seen that face staring in the glass, how many times I've wished that face was not my own;
The rain fades softly away, a shaft of sun pierces the brooding clouds like a sword;
I thought pierces me as well. Their is one who knows me deeper  than the others;
He knows how I cry inside while I put a smile on for the others, He knows how I remember mocking words and deeds;
He knows how I dream of hills and prairies far away.
He calls me by name and smiles at me;
He reaches out a hand for mine.
He knows me, because He made me and now shows me life, beyond the window.
  I wrote this poem, if you can call it that, a little while ago and thought you guys might like to read it and give me feed back on what yall think.

6 comments:

  1. Wow. This is very impressive. I like the brooding clouds especially. Great job with this it's terrific.

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  2. I really enjoyed that. Your transition was very good. You should write more poems.

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  3. Are you going to continue writing on your blog?

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  4. Life beyond the window. Sounds really good right now.

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  5. Simply, Stunningly, Sumptuously, Seriously, Scientifically, Sagaciously, Sublime.

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  6. this is great it's very deep and I could imagine everything! Great job!

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